I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Kaizah-Rae!! This is a good start to a blog post. I was just wondering if you meant that you would have the powers that Black Panther, Thor and Batman all have? Cause if so, that is such a good idea. All of their powers would come in handy at some point, especially if you want to look after everyone! Have you seen the Marvel movies? If so, what do you think about them?
Next time, I think you need to be more descriptive with your blog posts. Maybe write a small blurb about why you chose these heroes and powers, and even write what the activity was so the reader can understand. You have started off well, but I think you could maybe be more descriptive!
I can't wait to see more of your posts! Keep up the great work, I hope to see a reply from you soon! - Nadia :)
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Kaizah-Rae!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a good start to a blog post. I was just wondering if you meant that you would have the powers that Black Panther, Thor and Batman all have? Cause if so, that is such a good idea. All of their powers would come in handy at some point, especially if you want to look after everyone! Have you seen the Marvel movies? If so, what do you think about them?
Next time, I think you need to be more descriptive with your blog posts. Maybe write a small blurb about why you chose these heroes and powers, and even write what the activity was so the reader can understand. You have started off well, but I think you could maybe be more descriptive!
I can't wait to see more of your posts!
Keep up the great work, I hope to see a reply from you soon!
- Nadia :)