I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Kaizah It looks good but maybe you can put the step 3 a bit bigger I can see it a little bit.Can you add type Kaizah-Rae@gilberthorpeschool.nz How did you get so much On it
hi its ethan are u haveing a good day i like that u talking about u blog but next time u need to add more wrting cause u need talke more about yousefi good bye
Kia Ora Kaizah-Rae, Kirsty here! I think this blog post needs a little bit of work. I like that you have added your blog on there but don't you think they will already know what your blog is because they would be on your blog anway? Blog ya later.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora Kaizah-Rae.
ReplyDeleteIt would be good if you explained what you had done instead of just putting the digital learning object on your post.
hi kaizah-rae it is micah i like what have you done your object you post you are learning more so yea bye
ReplyDeleteHello Kaizah It looks good but maybe you can put the step 3 a bit bigger I can see it a little bit.Can you add type Kaizah-Rae@gilberthorpeschool.nz How did you get so much On it
ReplyDeletehi its ethan
ReplyDeleteare u haveing a good day i like that u talking about u blog but next time u need to add more wrting cause u need talke more about yousefi good bye
Kia Ora Kaizah-Rae, Kirsty here! I think this blog post needs a little bit of work. I like that you have added your blog on there but don't you think they will already know what your blog is because they would be on your blog anway? Blog ya later.
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