I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora its benaiah i liked the way you put the shoe its cool you taught me that you now how to make a snowman nexts time you could put more stuff on the man bye
Hey! its Sapphire i love your snowman he looks cool like you! Maybe next time you can make a Another snowman because you are very talented of making snowmans.
Hi I am Jasmine at Hornby Primary school in room 7. I like the snowman. It looks so fun. It is the best snoweman ever. I like it and the black hair and I like the feet too.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora this is Nikau.I like the snowman the you made.next time you should check your writing because it doesn't really make sense.
ReplyDeleteKia ora its benaiah
ReplyDeletei liked the way you put the shoe its cool
you taught me that you now how to make a snowman
nexts time you could put more stuff on the man
bye
hi i Remember ween we done the snow men
ReplyDeleteHi its brodie you are good at making snowman.how did you do it? ok bye.
ReplyDeleteHey! its Sapphire i love your snowman he looks cool like you! Maybe next time you can make a Another snowman because you are very talented of making snowmans.
ReplyDeleteHi I am Jasmine at Hornby Primary school in room 7. I like the snowman. It looks so fun. It is the best snoweman ever. I like it and the black hair and I like the feet too.
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